Steve is going through jail and he is thinking to himself that he doesn't belong there. Steve keeps thinking to himself that he doesn't he himself in the mirror. Steve cries at night and hopes he doesn't get beat up for it. All Steve hears at prison is somebody getting beat up, killed, or himself sniffling. As Steve has nothing to do he thinks he is in a movie, but its nothing like a movie, instead he tries to create a movie in his head to avoid boredom.
As I (Branden Brown) have seen many movies about jails, this is a true story. American History X is a movie about a man defending his family in times that are rough in his neighborhood and he shot and killed 3 African Americans, just to defend his family. He was also sent to jail that day and wasn't seen by any of family members for 7 years. As he starts as fresh meat at this prison he looks at other prisoners and thinks they aren't much, but he finds himself in trouble everywhere he goes and gets sent to the infirmary. He later discovers how to survive in this prison and kills 3 more men in the prison uncontrollably in a fight. He then is released 5 years after that.
Steve is probably really worried, and i would be also if I was 16 and in court for something that wasn't me. Steve may be thinking if he will be in jail this long or death sentenced he would scared of how he will die or how long he will be sentenced. He could not be worried in a reason because he has a defense team on his side. Capitol punishment should not be allowed in any state and for Steve.
Your first paragraph is really good, but you could use more detail. It has a couple spelling and grammar problems that should be fixed. Your second paragraph doesn't really stick to what we were supposed to write about.
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